The Annex Reviews, May 1999 - Wyatt's Fate, Parts 1 - 5 (JRD); The Sorcerer's Daughter (Andy Maynard); The Temple of Size (Anonymous); The Judgment of Paris, Parts I, II, III (Baldsage); Janet for Hire (Taliesin the Bard); Brainiacal Genius, Part One: Death and a Statue (Alexi92); Death Valley (Willy T.) - A New Beginning (Wyvern); Cliches, A Cyber Mockumentary, Parts 1 and 2 (Dimitri); Zonama (ZorroRojo); Donita's Revenge (JJ); Property of Raging Pythons (Lara V. Cataluna); Fucking the Champion (RedRacer); Movie Notes: A Midsummer Night's Dream Unfortunately, I can't accept attached files anymore, because of all the recent virus scares. If you have something you want me to look at, please embed it in the body of the email message, or send me the URL.
Wyatt's Fate, Parts 1 -5 [A-/B+]
Where posted: ASS, ASSTG (alt.sex.transgender)
When posted: 4/25/99
Author: JRD
Address: jrdss@micronet.net I'm always amused when the author of a story sequel warns us, as this one does, that "you really do need to have read that before this." How much character or plot development can occur when all the characters are fucking like rabbits? As in the story above, how much you like this depends on how fond you are of these tales. Though competently and briskly written, I found the characters cardboard and the drama limp; for me, TG needs a good plot to make it interesting (like Ruthless's "Jemilsil" or Waldo's Flash Gordon spoof) or real insight (as Vickie Tern's "Charmed.") This story had neither, dwelling instead on the transformation process and sex between she- males, and the psychological changes that occurred in the protagonist were only perfunctory. The lack of depth made the story only average. But if you want a competent TG tale you could do worse than this. | |
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